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Feedback:
- Doesn't say it's in Wellington
- Location is important!
- Too much emphasis on the date
- Switch out the imagery here
- Maybe a photo of Wellington with an overlay
- Confusing, what is the website for?
- Add in more elements/hints that it is an outdoor light show
- Play with gifs, animate movement of light source
- Change site plan to accommodate scrolling website
- Re-shoot imagery so it looks more sleek
- Too ragged/grainy, doesn't fit deluxe
POSITIVES!
- Engaging/stimulating colour palette
- Has potential
- Moving in the right direction
- Good amount of white space to balance out intensity of imagery
- Asemetric layout works well
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